Mercenary Story Rewrite - Page 11

S&Wshooter · #**101** 06-07-2010, 01:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941

I like the other mercs you came up with. All but the leader will die (Pieter needs to continue his mission). Also, change the name of Peter to something else. I don't want his name to get confused with Pieter.

You're gonna use my character? If his name is a problem, change it

S&Wshooter · #**102** 06-07-2010, 01:23 AM

You should make him whine about how he has to work with incompetent eejits

Swordfish941 · #**103** 06-07-2010, 01:25 AM

That's Rocco's job. He bitches a lot.

S&Wshooter · #**104** 06-07-2010, 01:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941

That's Rocco's job. He bitches a lot.

I was just thinking that ol' Pete could be like "Jesus Christ, these fookers are annoying"

Swordfish941 · #**105** 06-07-2010, 01:35 AM

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Originally Posted by S&Wshooter

I was just thinking that ol' Pete could be like "Jesus Christ, these fookers are annoying"

Are the "fookers" Greg's team or his team?

S&Wshooter · #**106** 06-07-2010, 01:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941

Are the "fookers" Greg's team or his team?

His team. Aren't they supposed to be Mall Ninjas or something?

k9870 · #**107** 06-07-2010, 01:47 AM

yeah, there jackasses pretty much, ill send you descriptions. can you send the leaders description?

S&Wshooter · #**108** 06-07-2010, 01:48 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870

yeah, there jackasses pretty much, ill send you descriptions. can you send the leaders description?

Sure. It's 2 PM's though

k9870 · #**109** 06-07-2010, 02:26 AM

cant wait to see a draft

S&Wshooter · #**110** 06-07-2010, 04:07 AM

BTW, "Jesus Christ, these fookers are annoying" translates to "Jesus Christus, die fookers is vervelend"

(Fun Fact: If you type in "fuckers" into the translater, it comes out as "fookers" anyways)