Mercenary Story (Part 2)

[Swordfish941]

Idea for scenes? I'll write your cameos later.

[S&Wshooter]

Originally Posted by Swordfish941

Idea for scenes? I'll write your cameos later.

Start setting up the story maybe? As apposed to just having the mercs do nothing

[k9870]

Yeah set up when they get their job, or write about it from the bad guys point of view.

[Swordfish941]

Originally Posted by k9870

Yeah set up when they get their job, or write about it from the bad guys point of view.

How about I write a few scenes from Van Zyl's point of view?

[S&Wshooter]

Originally Posted by Swordfish941

How about I write a few scenes from Van Zyl's point of view?

Sounds good. Let me take a look at them before you post, though

[Swordfish941]

Originally Posted by S&Wshooter

Sounds good. Let me take a look at them before you post, though

Okay, and here's my final choice for a Van Zyl actor, Ray Stevenson:

[S&Wshooter]

Originally Posted by Swordfish941

Okay, and here's my final choice for a Van Zyl actor, Ray Stevenson:

Damn, he fits my mental image of Van Zyl very closely

[Swordfish941]

Another passage:

Greg took the bag from the table and placed it into his garbage disposal. He turned it on and the bag was grinded into little bits. He sat down on his sofa and took out a cigarette. Katie joined him.

“I see you’ve shaved the animal off your face.”
“Yes, but it’ll just grow back in a few days.” He said, taking a drag. “So what are you here for?”

“I just wanted to visit you.”

“You wanna have sex?”

“No, maybe later. Anyway, there’s this new bar downtown. It’s called The Seagull’s Nest.”

“What kind of bar is it?”

“It’s a dive bar with a karaoke machine. But all in all, it’s a place to get drunk.”

Greg reached into his pocket and took out a small bottle of pills. He took two out and dry swallowed them.

“What are those?”

“Pills.”

“What for?”

“Migraines. They can be a bitch.”

“You’re abusing prescription medicine?”

“No. If I was abusing prescription medication, I be taking Dexedrine or Nembutal. I got this from a doctor.”

“I just don’t want you to die by overdose.”

“I won’t.” he said, leaning back into the couch. He stubbed his cigarette out in an ashtray.

[Swordfish941]

And here's the guy who I want to play Harvey Janders:

Harvey Janders.jpg

[Swordfish941]

Here's my new choice for Johnny: Joseph Gordon-Levitt