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09-09-2009, 04:29 AM
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Can you give me the abridged version of this plot?
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#2
09-09-2009, 04:54 AM
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no problem,
Basically it's you have a girl from a criminal family leave her father and his drug traficing pals. She meets up with a guy who was raised by a LEO. They try to be typical older teens young adults until they get tired of Maria's old Cartel trying to kill them both and end things really hard.
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#3
09-10-2009, 12:16 AM
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mmmmm.......any sex scenes.........
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#4
09-10-2009, 01:27 AM
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Yes there are going to be implied and a few sex scenes. I'm trying to portray the characters as human beings and not 2-D action movie type characters.
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#5
09-10-2009, 02:07 AM
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lol I was kidding but okay...
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#6
09-10-2009, 02:45 AM
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everyone has a reason for their actions and every action effects everything else.
Thus Maria and Johnny survive while other's do not.
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#7
09-10-2009, 05:34 PM
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A fellow writer, huh? Sounds like a book I'd buy. Maria sounds like my kind of girl.
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