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05-11-2011, 04:57 AM
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Not bad at all. I've seen much worse not only published but part of a five book series.
Could we get the backstory on the characters too? 
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05-14-2011, 06:41 PM
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haha, Rockwolf, not much of a back story really, threw that together for a five page assignment.
Working on stringing together a novella called "ZAAP" as well that sorta takes that the above concept and runs with it. It has a bunch of character development and even features Jed and Tara, albeit in peripheral roles.
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