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Graphic Novel I'm Making (pics)
For my English course on Graphic Novels, my final project is to make my own graphic novel. I only have the first page done so far (takes a good day to make one). Let me know what you guys think, or if you have any suggestions.
And yes, it's filled with guns and noir, how I like it.
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Looks good. Is that a Mark 23?
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It looks like some kind of Glock
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Yeah, it's a Glock. I didn't have the time to get a good picture of a gun for reference so I drew a Glock because they're pretty simple to draw, and I have enough memory of the design to draw it well.
A big shootout is coming up so I'll have a for more guns in, and I'll do my best to draw them well.
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If you're open to technical critiques of your art, I'd like to point out that your Glock is gigantic.
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What if that guy is like 5'2 and the Glock is the largest model they make?
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I suck with scale, I know. haha
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Criticism-wise, you seem a little too worried about having empty space in your panels; you've crammed the sky with stars and the guy's jacket with creases, and the result looks weird. Less is more, as they say.
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A fellow classmate is making a graphic novel using this really expensive comic making program. I showed him and the teacher the page printed out and they asked me if I too was using it. I was like, "Hard work and photoshop, bitches."
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