Draft for review

[Rockwolf66]

Originally Posted by Swordfish941

I have found your weapons list. I just want to know where he gets the weapons from. I'm now rewriting my entire mercinary story. I feel like my dialogue is too flat and the characters should use more regional weapons.

With Johnny he gets his personal weapons legally. He had a half dozen cars and $10,000 in the bank by the time he hit 16. Currently he's switched from flipping cars to flipping houses. So he has money to spend.

As far as Maria goes...the various traficers on the US/mexican border litterally make millions of Dollars a year. Trust me if she survives longer than the cartel she's just left she will not have to worry much about money.

Right now I am re-writing and expanding Johnny's first real fight scene. It should be pretty good as I've been acting out portions of the scene with a training partner. Hope to post it soon.