Mercenary Story Rewrite

[S&Wshooter]

Originally Posted by k9870

What are the other mercs they meet supposed to be like? Tough guys with excess testoterone who think they own the place? Solid pros with SF backgrounds? Misfits kicked out of other units?

The A-Team!

[Swordfish941]

Either the misfits or the testosteroneguys.

[k9870]

So guys who think there cool shit and use overpowered and unpractical weapons and explosives when not necessary? And would carry mall ninja stuff slapped on their guns?

[Swordfish941]

Originally Posted by k9870

So guys who think there cool shit and use overpowered and unpractical weapons and explosives when not necessary? And would carry mall ninja stuff slapped on their guns?

Yes. They're sitting ducks to the enemy.

[S&Wshooter]

Originally Posted by Swordfish941

Yes. They're sitting ducks to the enemy.

It sounds like they are going to die hilarious, humiliating deaths

[k9870]

I see them killing a bunch of somali thugs but getting overrun, where when they start losing they panick and make a ton of mistakes taht get them killed. I have some ides for these guys I may write up tomorrow. SW, think you can make a leader character? Mine are more dumb blind follower types.

[S&Wshooter]

Originally Posted by k9870

I see them killing a bunch of somali thugs but getting overrun, where when they start losing they panick and make a ton of mistakes taht get them killed. I have some ides for these guys I may write up tomorrow. SW, think you can make a leader character? Mine are more dumb blind follower types.

Give me awhile. I am already trying to come up with a Afrikaan dude for Swordfish

[k9870]

Hey Swordfish I had actually come up with a somali character in anotehr story once if your interested, i dont know if you need more bad guys like an enforcer, seocnd in command, unrelated bad guys, etc.

[S&Wshooter]

What year is this set?

[Swordfish941]

It is set in the year of 2019