I read it and I like it.
Just as a guide:
* L79 Powder Actuated Nailer = American 180?
* K68 pistol = SIG-Sauer P210
* 1811 bolt-action sniper rifle = Lee-Enfield sniper
* Charles & Boyle assault rifle = AKM (bakelite magazine) with GP-35 launcher
* Angus combat pistol = Stechkin APS
* Alconox 1931 = IMI Galil ARM sniper 7.62x51mm NATO version
* Grantham 7C machine pistol = MAC-11
* Delfin 40mm riot launcher = M79 grenade launcher
* Marian 12 gauge shotgun = Ithaca 37 "Stakeout"
* QED .22 pistol = Colt Woodsman variant
* Westron assault rifle = FN F2000 fitted with FN EGLM grenade launcher
* Welgun autopistol = Vector CP1
* Centro pistol = Heckler & Koch VP70
* Brito submachine gun = Calico M960
I suggest changing the Delfin into something more oddball like 35mm (so it isn't common to this world) and the shotgun round to 11 Gauge. Also possibley change the QED pistol to something like .23 caliber. Great work so far.
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