You both have very good points. I'll get rid of the shotgun and have a scene where Greg advises him not to take the shotgun since he's already "carrying a machine gun, a .45, and a hand held Howitzer". I've also decided to ditch the mining camp and decided to have them be a part of a mercenary force used by the Somalian government to retake Mogadishu. And I've decided a new actor for Will the Doctor: Sean Maher (Simon Tam on Firefly).
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Can we start with part where Jayne gets knocked out by 90-pound girl? Hoban "Wash" Washburne (Alan Tudyk), Serenity
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