Thread: Mercenary Story Rewrite
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Old 06-07-2010, 01:16 AM
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I like the other mercs you came up with. All but the leader will die (Pieter needs to continue his mission). Also, change the name of Peter to something else. I don't want his name to get confused with Pieter.
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