Graphic Novel I'm Making (pics)
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For my English course on Graphic Novels, my final project is to make my own graphic novel. I only have the first page done so far (takes a good day to make one). Let me know what you guys think, or if you have any suggestions.
And yes, it's filled with guns and noir, how I like it. |
Looks good. Is that a Mark 23?
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A big shootout is coming up so I'll have a for more guns in, and I'll do my best to draw them well. |
If you're open to technical critiques of your art, I'd like to point out that your Glock is gigantic.
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Criticism-wise, you seem a little too worried about having empty space in your panels; you've crammed the sky with stars and the guy's jacket with creases, and the result looks weird. Less is more, as they say.
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A fellow classmate is making a graphic novel using this really expensive comic making program. I showed him and the teacher the page printed out and they asked me if I too was using it. I was like, "Hard work and photoshop, bitches." |
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