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S&Wshooter 06-16-2010 02:40 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14573)
Um, what sterling? He just shot some plates.

It was the "Beretta 9mm submachine gun"

Swordfish941 06-22-2010 10:48 PM

After much procrastination, I've finally been able to sit down and write (I'm at my grandparent's house and there's not a lot of things to distract me with the exception of a first edition copy of Les Miserables).

k9870 06-23-2010 12:54 AM

Who hires the mercs in your story and why?

S&Wshooter 06-23-2010 01:00 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14727)
Who hires the mercs in your story and why?

I hire them to safely retrieve Javier from the bottom of that big ass sinkhole so I can kick his ass and get the $5 he owes me :D

k9870 06-23-2010 02:57 AM

what does that mean exactly?

Spartan198 06-23-2010 03:49 AM

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Originally Posted by S&Wshooter (Post 14729)
I hire them to safely retrieve Javier from the bottom of that big ass sinkhole so I can kick his ass and get the $5 he owes me :D

Then kick him back down into the hole afterward, right?

S&Wshooter 06-23-2010 04:28 AM

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Originally Posted by Spartan198 (Post 14735)
Then kick him back down into the hole afterward, right?

I haven't thought that far ahead

Swordfish941 06-23-2010 07:13 PM

The mercs are hired by a man named Janders, who works for Somolia's now failing goverment. Somolia is once again at civil war. He wants the mercs to take down one of the top militia leaders, so they can have the upper hand in the war.

k9870 06-23-2010 08:47 PM

And im guessing janders has a few troops of his own? What are they like?

Swordfish941 06-23-2010 10:41 PM

Janders is just a contact. He isn't related to anything military.

k9870 06-23-2010 11:17 PM

But im guessing the government hiring the mercs has a fighting force that will be involved, a large scale battle would be cool.

Swordfish941 06-24-2010 06:08 PM

I think Greg should carry another 1911 pistol as a back-up. I'm thinking of using a Springfield Tactical Response Pistol fitted with Pachmayr grips and kept in a DeSantis shoulder rig.

Swordfish941 06-24-2010 10:12 PM

I have new ideas for my story I'd like to share with you. Rocco now keeps his P9S in a tanker holster. I've now decided to replace Greg's Mini-14 with a Steyr SSG 69 fitted with a five round magazine, double set triggers, sound suppressor, and folding bipod. If anyone have anyone has any suggestion, please PM me.

k9870 06-24-2010 10:45 PM

I noticed the mercs i made up have no sniper, i think ill create one. More characters, more people to kill off in an epic battle.

The Steyr is a great rifle, so underrated. Im surprised its not more popular. Great choice.

Swordfish941 06-25-2010 10:12 PM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14777)
I noticed the mercs i made up have no sniper, i think ill create one.

Don't sweat it. Greg can serve as a sniper. He can carry around his rifle on his back.

k9870 06-26-2010 01:47 AM

OK, cool. I think the upgraded Ak would be better for sean, since an arms dealer would want good gear and could upgrade.

Swordfish941 06-26-2010 07:56 PM

I just found out that the godamn Westboro Baptist Church says that South Africa is a "Fag Nation". South Africa is one of my favorite countries (along with Ireland, Israel, and the good ol' US of A). If Greg would ever run into them, he would have a suprise for them: a .45 hollowpoint round to the head.

k9870 06-27-2010 08:30 PM

Westboro.....make a clever ploy on words to make a extremist religous enemy based on them fighting them. Kind of like how "Hanoi Joan Flanders" In Stephen Hunter's I, Sniper.

Swordfish941 06-27-2010 11:59 PM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14804)
Westboro.....make a clever ploy on words to make a extremist religous enemy based on them fighting them. Kind of like how "Hanoi Joan Flanders" In Stephen Hunter's I, Sniper.

Can you explain this for me. I don't get this (like how I didn't get that Indian Comedian's jokes on The Weekend Update).

k9870 06-28-2010 01:57 AM

Like make up an organization with a similar sounding name and same basic philosophies and practices. So everyone knows who the group you based them on is but you cant be sued.

Swordfish941 06-28-2010 02:16 AM

I have an idea where a heavily drunk Rocco shoots Ares in the foot with his P9S. Ares responds by angrily chasing him around the boat trying to shoot him with his Mk. 23 and calling him a "goddamn greaseball". Greg ends it buy knocking him out with a crowbar and making Rocco sober by dunking his head in cold water.

k9870 06-28-2010 02:45 AM

I thought they all carried cougars now? Sounds funny but the getting drunk and shooting at each other sounds like a thing the group of jackasses i made up would do.

(I like when people each have an individual weapon though.)

S&Wshooter 06-28-2010 03:20 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14815)
I have an idea where a heavily drunk Rocco shoots Ares in the foot with his P9S. Ares responds by angrily chasing him around the boat trying to shoot him with his Mk. 23 and calling him a "goddamn greaseball". Greg ends it buy knocking him out with a crowbar and making Rocco sober by dunking his head in cold water.

And everyone else just sits there and laughs so hard that they cannot breathe....

Swordfish941 06-28-2010 04:29 AM

I've decided to base Rocco's voice on Carlos Menica. And by that I mean the Carlos Menica from South Park who can't come up with anything original, whose one eyed trouser snake doesn't work, and who got beaten to a bloody, puss filled pulp by that idiot Kanye West.

S&Wshooter 06-28-2010 04:40 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14818)
I've decided to base Rocco's voice on Carlos Menica. And by that I mean the Carlos Menica from South Park who can't come up with anything original, whose one eyed trouser snake doesn't work, and who got beaten to a bloody, puss filled pulp by that idiot Kanye West.

Sounds fun

Swordfish941 06-28-2010 05:12 AM

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Originally Posted by S&Wshooter (Post 14819)
Sounds fun

You've seen that episode?

S&Wshooter 06-28-2010 05:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14820)
You've seen that episode?

No, I don't watch South Park

Swordfish941 06-28-2010 06:10 AM

I love the episode where various Youtube celebrities kill each other. it sucked that Tron Guy, Dramatic Chimpmunk, and Sneezing Panda died, but I absolutely loved it when Chris Crocker died (he sucks horse tits).

Zulu Two Six 06-28-2010 07:14 AM

chris crocker is a he?

Swordfish941 06-28-2010 08:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Zulu Two Six (Post 14823)
chris crocker is a he?

Yes. Quite unsettleling, isn't it?

Spartan198 07-03-2010 09:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14828)
Yes. Quite unsettleling, isn't it?

Downright scary.

Markost 07-03-2010 10:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Spartan198 (Post 15094)
Downright scary.

http://images.encyclopediadramatica....azy_Faggot.gif

Excalibur 07-04-2010 02:59 AM

^ That's not scary, that's just some guy being weird and stupid.

k9870 07-04-2010 03:03 AM

Hey swordfish do you have a draft yet.

Markost 07-04-2010 02:28 PM

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Originally Posted by Excalibur (Post 15096)
^ That's not scary, that's just some guy being weird and stupid.

Offtopic: He´s Crocker...


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