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S&Wshooter 06-05-2010 01:43 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14047)
What are the other mercs they meet supposed to be like? Tough guys with excess testoterone who think they own the place? Solid pros with SF backgrounds? Misfits kicked out of other units?

The A-Team!

Swordfish941 06-05-2010 02:06 AM

Either the misfits or the testosteroneguys.

k9870 06-05-2010 02:08 AM

So guys who think there cool shit and use overpowered and unpractical weapons and explosives when not necessary? And would carry mall ninja stuff slapped on their guns?

Swordfish941 06-05-2010 02:14 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14051)
So guys who think there cool shit and use overpowered and unpractical weapons and explosives when not necessary? And would carry mall ninja stuff slapped on their guns?

Yes. They're sitting ducks to the enemy.

S&Wshooter 06-05-2010 02:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14052)
Yes. They're sitting ducks to the enemy.

It sounds like they are going to die hilarious, humiliating deaths

k9870 06-05-2010 02:26 AM

I see them killing a bunch of somali thugs but getting overrun, where when they start losing they panick and make a ton of mistakes taht get them killed. I have some ides for these guys I may write up tomorrow. SW, think you can make a leader character? Mine are more dumb blind follower types.

S&Wshooter 06-05-2010 02:28 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14054)
I see them killing a bunch of somali thugs but getting overrun, where when they start losing they panick and make a ton of mistakes taht get them killed. I have some ides for these guys I may write up tomorrow. SW, think you can make a leader character? Mine are more dumb blind follower types.

Give me awhile. I am already trying to come up with a Afrikaan dude for Swordfish

k9870 06-05-2010 02:32 AM

Hey Swordfish I had actually come up with a somali character in anotehr story once if your interested, i dont know if you need more bad guys like an enforcer, seocnd in command, unrelated bad guys, etc.

S&Wshooter 06-05-2010 02:36 AM

What year is this set?

Swordfish941 06-05-2010 03:16 AM

It is set in the year of 2019

Swordfish941 06-05-2010 04:41 AM

I've decided to make Rocco's sidearm a Beretta 8045 Cougar. Now all the mercs have one.

S&Wshooter 06-05-2010 04:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14059)
I've decided to make Rocco's sidearm a Beretta 8045 Cougar. Now all the mercs have one.

Awesome! The 8045 is very underated and it is the only Beretta fit for a man to boot

S&Wshooter 06-06-2010 12:24 AM

Swordfish, I need to know what year the story is set so I can figure out how old the Afrikaan is going to have to be

k9870 06-06-2010 12:29 AM

he said 2019

S&Wshooter 06-06-2010 12:32 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14101)
he said 2019

Then the character he is asking me to make cannot be Rhodesian like he aked

Swordfish941 06-06-2010 12:37 AM

Rhodesia is now know as Zimbabwe, so make him from there.

S&Wshooter 06-06-2010 12:39 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14103)
Rhodesia is now know as Zimbabwe, so make him from there.

Maybe I can make him experienced in combat due to defending his family during the current attempted genocide of Whites by native Africans

k9870 06-06-2010 02:19 PM

I came up with my somali badguy in a story with him, a terrorist cell with a leader, second in command a nd a few operatives, a police detective and a homeland security agent. I dont know if any interest you.

Swordfish941 06-07-2010 01:16 AM

I like the other mercs you came up with. All but the leader will die (Pieter needs to continue his mission). Also, change the name of Peter to something else. I don't want his name to get confused with Pieter.

k9870 06-07-2010 01:18 AM

who's pieter?

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 01:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14121)
I like the other mercs you came up with. All but the leader will die (Pieter needs to continue his mission). Also, change the name of Peter to something else. I don't want his name to get confused with Pieter.

You're gonna use my character? If his name is a problem, change it

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 01:23 AM

You should make him whine about how he has to work with incompetent eejits

Swordfish941 06-07-2010 01:25 AM

That's Rocco's job. He bitches a lot.

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 01:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14125)
That's Rocco's job. He bitches a lot.

I was just thinking that ol' Pete could be like "Jesus Christ, these fookers are annoying"

Swordfish941 06-07-2010 01:35 AM

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Originally Posted by S&Wshooter (Post 14126)
I was just thinking that ol' Pete could be like "Jesus Christ, these fookers are annoying"

Are the "fookers" Greg's team or his team?

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 01:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14127)
Are the "fookers" Greg's team or his team?

His team. Aren't they supposed to be Mall Ninjas or something?

k9870 06-07-2010 01:47 AM

yeah, there jackasses pretty much, ill send you descriptions. can you send the leaders description?

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 01:48 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14129)
yeah, there jackasses pretty much, ill send you descriptions. can you send the leaders description?

Sure. It's 2 PM's though

k9870 06-07-2010 02:26 AM

cant wait to see a draft

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 04:07 AM

BTW, "Jesus Christ, these fookers are annoying" translates to "Jesus Christus, die fookers is vervelend"

(Fun Fact: If you type in "fuckers" into the translater, it comes out as "fookers" anyways)

Swordfish941 06-07-2010 04:14 AM

Is that in german?

S&Wshooter 06-07-2010 04:19 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14147)
Is that in german?

Afrikaans

http://translate.google.com/#en|af|

S&Wshooter 06-08-2010 01:12 AM

We are getting recognition for our help somewhere in the book, right? Maybe in the Author's note?

Swordfish941 06-08-2010 01:30 AM

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Originally Posted by S&Wshooter (Post 14196)
We are getting recognition for our help somewhere in the book, right? Maybe in the Author's note?

Don't worry, I'll give you guys credit. I don't want to hog up all the glory.

S&Wshooter 06-08-2010 01:33 AM

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Originally Posted by Swordfish941 (Post 14200)
Don't worry, I'll give you guys credit. I don't want to hog up all the glory.

Just checking. I wouldn't want to have to hire mercs (I know a guy who runs a small PMC AND a guy who lives 2 streets away from the guy who runs a large PMC) to hunt you down :)

k9870 06-08-2010 01:37 AM

If the book gets turned into a movie I want a cameo.

S&Wshooter 06-08-2010 01:37 AM

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Originally Posted by k9870 (Post 14206)
If the book gets turned into a movie I want a cameo.

Random jerk #153!

Swordfish941 06-08-2010 01:45 AM

Here's the actor's that I want to play the mercs if it gets turned into a movie:

Greg - possibly James Caviezel

Ares - Mickey Rourke

Rocco - Edgar Ramirez

Katie - Not sure on this but Mila Kunis

Johnny - Bradley Cooper

S&Wshooter 06-08-2010 01:48 AM

Peter van Zyl- Oliver Riedel (bass player from Rammstein), if the dude can act

http://userserve-ak.last.fm/serve/_/...ium_oliver.jpg

k9870 06-08-2010 11:36 AM

I could paly maybe todd or one of the jackass mercs joining peter, SW would be a random merc with a vest full of SWs like the Il Duce rig


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