Heh, reminds me of a picture on videogame character design: it's called "Character detail: the slippery slope."

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4.../detailing.jpg

Just got page two done. Deciding on how to color the room wasn't working well, looks like drunken water-coloring IMO. Did a smidge better with the scaling though.

Next page, the light and TV get shot, so it's all Sin City-stlye black and white.

Is the weaponry identifiable to people?

I spy with my little eye: An AK varient, a MAC-10, and possibly a Mosberg shotgun.

BTW, the main character in your second page looks like Gordon Freeman from Half Life.

I kind of based him on what I looked like before I got a haircut, and aged him more to look like my dad. Then I gave him the Josey Wales-esque scar under his right eye.

It's an AKMS (I made the folding stock too thin), indeed a MAC-10, and A Serbu Super Shorty 9 (I gave it a genuine Mossy receiver, I like them better than Mavericks), but since it's a receiver only shot you can't see the short barrel.

They are all common "bad guy" guns, and IMFDb has lots of shots of thugs firing them, so I figured it's make it easier to find images to base the drawings on.

Page 3 is gonna be a bitch and a half to draw. Looking forward to drawing the ending though. :D

I got page three and four drawn up, but until I get Corel Paintshop Pro reinstalled on my new computer I just got, I can't work with them.

So in the mean time, enjoy one of my old strips I made two years ago:

Got the Paint Shop Pro disk I needed to finish the graphic novel with in the mail today. Project is do tomorrow. Spent ~8+ hours working to finish it. Enjoy.

I was going to make the Desert Eagle jam originally, but I was pressed for time so I omitted it. Thought the DE was a good stereotypical weapon for the villian. I wanted him to have a revolver originally, but it was easier to draw the DE from memory.